Bad Luck And Lousy Scripts
Bad Luck And Lousy Scripts
-After a line from Killing Moon by Jo Nesbo
Of all the Tiki Bars I’ve inhabited, this is the most adored.
Under the thatch of the lanai, my heart,
blasted in the storm of summer’s children,
chewing on choral pedestals where sea creatures
sun themselves in the cove.
I drank rum from a coconut through a hole bored into it,
sucking out every last bit of pulp blended with pineapple
until silky smooth and deadly.
And I took a hand in mine
and I said something like
– Yes –
And he said something like
– Yes –
And we hummed a song
– Together –
and the most frequently asked question in town
answered with bad luck and lousy scripts
all written at the drag show on the strip
after a couple of doubles down
and a beer goggle babe who left you hanging
and empty in the back seat of your own sedan.
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Love Harry Hole, Jo Nesbo, and your YESs and TOGETHER sections.
I read this line and said – that has to be a poem all by itself!
Woman of my own heart. I should keep that more in mind while I’m reading. Thank you very much for your insightful comment.
favorite section:
“And I took a hand in mine
and I said something like
– Yes –
And he said something like
– Yes –
And we hummed a song
– Together – “
Thank you.
Alissa. excellent. I would love to hear you read this in Cincinnati.
Could make that happen!
It was the rum, Alissa. Always the rum 😏
Rum leading to bad luck and lousy scripts. lol. Rum in the coconut 🥥 🌴