Day Residue
The hours unresolved
appear in my dreams unsolved
as long walks to nowhere.
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The hours unresolved
appear in my dreams unsolved
as long walks to nowhere.
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wow. this is amazing. title, each line, very poignant
Great haiku!
Love the title and how it drips into dreams!
I like the progression
from unresolved
to unsolved
to nowhere
A beautiful gem! “Long walks to nowhere” often a great meditation.
Love “day residue,” a new phrase for me, and this poem captures this wonderfully!
This is excellent. There’s a real musicality in it, and I love the rhyme. What an awesome haiku!
I love how this turns the content of a traditional haiku and moves toward the physical in the final line