June Forecast XXIII: Heat Advisory Intensifies
Part I
The day so hot, I dove into a painting—
the first water scene I saw— a stormy sea
painted with Prussian blues, teals rolling
round, with turquoise tips, and the sky,
an Aegean blue mottled with dark clouds.
Two fisherman aboard a sailboat
of time-darkened white sails, holding tight
to lines, hoisted me aboard. Up close, I noticed
their hip boots and dark grey oilskins, and beneath,
navy woolen sweaters, all of a time long past.
I recognized the older man— the painter,
Russell Bauer, who once loved my grandmother.
Not startled by my presence, he growled,
How’s your dear Oma? Though rain and wind
whipped his face, I could see his tears.
He didn’t seem to mind, scowled and said,
Yes, lost love is forever my tempest. He took my hand—
begged me to leave, to take a message to her.
I found myself on the floor below the frame,
a coil of seaweed entangled in my toes. Echoes of
I still love rang all day in this tiny half bath.
An ekphrastic, from Sails on Stormy Seas by Russell Bauer.
1965. Acrylic on canvas. 18 x 24.
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I love this — a great love story to take the mind off the heat. Fantastic details, as always, as always a pleasure to read your work.
Diving into your poem breaks the heat indeed!
Strong landing of this imagining:
“I found myself on the floor below the frame,
a coil of seaweed entangled in my toes. Echoes of
I still love rang all day in this tiny half bath.”
Oh my goodness. What a beautiful poem. I feel the spray of the ocean, the regret of lost love in his growl. Bravo!
this is my favorite poem of the day. this really displays what a good ekphrastic looks like. i feel like i don’t even need to see what the painting looks like–i can visualize it perfectly because of your poignant imagery. thank you for creating a scene we can escape to on this hot day.
This is beautiful – I felt myself drawn into the painting and the story in equal measure!
I love how you bring the art to life with movement and dialogue. Very cool.
This is a beautiful ekphrastic! I love how you turn toward this impulse to surprise with “I dove into a painting—” and all that comes after it.
“Two fisherman aboard a sailboat
of time-darkened white sails,
holding tight to lines,
hoisted me aboard.”
… all that came before that and aft,
I was THERE, wind-tossed and sea-splashed,
with his tears blowing onto MY face. I was there!
Thank you for this vivid imagery! I love it!!!