Chiaroscuro
“Look not upon me, because I am black,
because the sun hath looked upon me.”
— Song of Solomon 1:6a
Wisdom is the language of light & shadow
& when offered the divine, you chose
to straddle that collision, loving the Lord,
walking in the statutes of David your father,
but sacrificing & burning incense on the high places.
I cannot judge your ways; I cannot comprehend you
separated by millennia, you with that wisdom, but—
I wonder how illuminated the blessing, laid beside
the dark & deep of its perversion. What greater temptation
did you embrace & face entanglement: Malevolence
of antediluvian spirits, or the wiles
& ways of seven hundred wives—
three hundred concubines besides? What wisdom
lies with audacious hubris—thinking you could please
that many women—or control
that many demons? And yet
He still looked upon you, still spoke
& wrote of you, with sweet esteem…
at least until His anger burned & tore
the kingdom away from you.
Yet–when scripture selects a song of love—
to persist the centuries, whether Queens or Princesses
or any other truth of identity, your serenade rose above—
even—the poetry of your father. Your banner
over her was love; she sat down under your shadow
with great delight, your fruit was sweet to her taste.
She called you apple tree among the trees of the wood
& I cannot help but see that Rembrandt Triangle:
Wisdom, & Apples, & Intimacy—
your pale against her dark—
that final temptation buried
within a core of shadows.
*Layout mattered/was essential to me on this one. Image won’t post here, but on FB*
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Beautiful & fascinating (as your work always is!)
‘Wisdom, & Apples, & Intimacy’- haunting us forever…
Thank you, Leah ☺️
Wonderful, the interplay of light,
in couplets and love love the endashments and enjambments.
“Wisdom, & Apples, & Intimacy—
your pale against her dark—”
Imagisticaly rendered to feed the landing perfectly.
Bravo!!! A heartrending fall down the page.
I finally got around to plumbing the ideas you set me on in your previous reply.
Thank you, for both, sir
😀
Aaaahhhh… you have balanced the sensory details with the spiritual so well. And what a perfect title.
Thank you so very much for sharing this lovely ekphrastic poem.
Thank you, E.E.!
This feels like a turn to me, and I love the sheer poetry of it: “She called you apple tree among the trees of the wood/& I cannot help but see that Rembrandt Triangle:”
💙💙💙
The shape of this poem, the couplets, use of ‘&’ instead of the word, and mixing italics create light and lightness in with dark and shadow.
Love:
“Wisdom is the language of light & shadow”
and
“Wisdom, & Apples, & Intimacy—
your pale against her dark—
that final temptation buried
within a core of shadows.”
Thank you, Pam!!
It means a lot that you think so. I was trying to create those feels.