Thoughts on Weeding the Garden
I rose early before the heat,
while the grass, still wet with dew,
glistened in watery dreams.
Clawing out weeds that would
choke the heart of such singular
beauty – black dirt clinging to hands
and forearms. Sweat dripping a
salty prayer. I protect the tender bud.
My lisianthus, a flower so much
like a rose, with fleshy unfurling petals,
sans thorns and trellis, do not
like their roots disturbed.
No one really does. Do they?
In another garden, toil and words
are lost on the rootless man.
He carries his hate in a golden suitcase,
opens it in his paved garden,
and says, “How beautiful.”
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Beautiful, sensuous and full of truth-speak, especially in the third and fourth stanza.
Wow! : “He carries his hate in a golden suitcase,/opens it in his paved garden,/and says, “How beautiful.” “
Thank you, Pam. I think this heat has made my frustrations simmer this morning.☀️
Love how this poem started and where you took it at the end. So beautifully done. Some of my favorite parts were:
“watery dreams,” “Sweat dripping a / salty prayer” and the question “No one really does. Do they?”
Thank you, Karen. As always, I appreciate your commentary.🌹
I also live where this poem ended up. I love the rhetorical question at the end of the third stanza. An excellent poem!
Thanks so much, Linda🌹
I love the movement in “I protect the tender bud./My lisianthus, a flower so much/like a rose…”
Thank you, Shaun.🌹
Wonderful turn! To a not-so-wonderful being. “the rootless man” – so descriptive, says so much. My rhetorical question: How does he exist?
I ask myself that every day , my friend. 🌹