H(a)unted . . . too
sometimes I caught
that look on her face
it hurt
on those nights I knew
what it meant
to be
on the edge
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Man! This title works overtime! And that last stanza! Well done!
Thank you for your helpful feedback and generosity. Always a thrill when someone takes the time to read my writing. It means so much, Pam. With gratitude
Agreed, that title adds so many layers here. Very cuttingly personal too. Those moments of realization hit deep, and it’s often terrifying where it can send us. Thank you so much for posting this.
First, you are most welcome, P.C. Second, your feedback is so helpful; matched only by your kind words. Finally, thank you for taking time to read my writing. It means so much. Be well
What craft! The title, the structure, the flow just speak to me so much. Thanks!
You are welcome, Deanna. Grateful for your kind comments. Your feedback helps to hone the craft (always a work in progress). Thank you for making my day by reading my poem. Wishing you loving-kindness
I agree–the compressed detail and form create an effective and punchy poem–a snapshot of story.
Many thanks, Shaun, for your kind words and valuable feedback. Your support this month is immeasurable. Always appreciate someone reading my poems. With a bow
The title, the efficiency of words. Startling and stunning! Such an excellent write!
Grateful for your perceptive feedback and kindness, H.A. Such supportive comments are helpful in becoming a better writer. Thank you for pausing and reading my work. It is much appreciated. Be well
The title sets up the layers to follow. Well crafted!
Thank you, Linda, for your generous comments. Your kind words and perceptive feedback is extremely helpful. Appreciate you taking time to read my poetry. With gratitude
Clever, especially the title.
Tom, thank you for your kind words. So appreciate you taking time to read and comment on my writing. All feedback helps hone my craft. With a bow of gratitude
Very nice, L., I especially like the shape of the poem, it creates natural pauses and emphasis on those few key words.
Thank you, Bill, for your kind supportive words. So appreciate the perceptive feedback as it helps me hone the craft (a perpetual work in progress). Such a joy when someone pauses, reads, and comments on my writing. Be well