iPhone 16 Pro Max
What are you looking for
there in the bright light?
What are you sliding your fingers
toward?
Zoom in,
and the room fades to gray.
Squint a little longer, and the world
shrinks to a rectangle,
every beauty, every horror
tucked in a flattened box.
The earth
used to be round.
You used to love
its curves,
used to spin in circles
just for the taste
of falling.
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Wonderful description and thoughts about the ‘box’.
This very effective! You had me from the beginning.
Wow! This might be the first great poem I’ve ever read about technology.
truth-speak:
every beauty, every horror/tucked in a flattened box./The earth/used to be round./You used to love/its curves,/used to spin in circles/just for the taste/of falling.
this line is incredible: just for the taste/of falling.