American Sentence LXXX
Cowboy tap-tunes his long fingernails on the moon behind glass letters.
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Cowboy tap-tunes his long fingernails on the moon behind glass letters.
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This sentence is strangely magical and rhythmic. What you can do with one sentence!
Thanks, I’m digging deep. The form helps with that.
also, I noticed that I am beginning to speak in 17 syllabled sentences after 27 days of American Sentences!
I like this one …and i can’t say why.
It has a cowboys and aliens kinda vibe that just works.
🙂 Can’t go wrong with cowboys and aliens!
I love the surrealism of a cowboy rapping his fingers on the moon! It belies a deeper feeling and relationship to it
Thanks, Shaun! 🙂
Your sentences always make pause and search, which is good, and perhaps I’m slow to appreciate this, but they’re interrelated. You’re telling us a story one sentence at a time?
Glad you are pausing and searching with them, Lee. I birth them a day at a time and pause and search while I think them out! Yes, I am telling a story one sentence at a time. Each person is aboard or boarding the train going somewhere. The poet is on board and is the witness. And has her own secrets 😉
Oh, I love this, Pam – the moon seen through glass is such a nice touch.
Thanks, Nancy! 🙂
You constantly elevate my view of the lowly sentence! What a creative mind!
Thanks, Sylvia! Grateful to have a place to tumble my musings out!
Once again, a marvel.
Thanks, Kevin! The train is full of richness!
I am seriously going to miss reading these!
Aww, thank you!
“on the moon” Rich sentence! (again)
🙂
Yes, Pam, another generative image!
Wonder where and when we might read those that came before and will come after once this amazing lexpomo event ends for a year?
Thanks, Bud! Hoping to create a little book of these sentences…will see…
On board, with everyone here. We can’t go Cold Turkey after the 30th. Pretty please… Keep sharing the gems.
Ahhh, Fanny, thank you. Writing these sentences in community has been awesome! After 3 more days brain will need a break!
Rhythmically rich and the musicality flies down the track when reading this poem out loud. Love the mystique and mysticism, Pam
Thanks, L. Sipe. 🙂
Love the tapping of his long fingernails on the moon. I can almost picture the pointed toe of his cowboy boot keeping tune.
Me, too! Glad you can see him in action!