As If Memory Wasn’t a Wound
Everywhere the spirits are hungry.
In a dream the sea screams at me,
the world is full of tiny traps.
Hunted by lions in terrible skins,
I’m suddenly aware
of what it means to be a body,
a mouth made for eating darkness.
I dreamt you and I were walking underwater
stretched backwards through time
inflamed by moonlight,
luminous silhouettes wet
with the crushed velvet of desire,
emptying ourselves into a spiral galaxy.
We swam through the night
like thirsty flowers, furious fuming stars
to a point of pure blur, pure erasure.
Even as the long wave of pleasure falls apart,
I emerge from the pale nets of sleep
like a knot of silk loosed, leaving a rip—
grief I couldn’t have imagined the magnitude of.
~ Cento using lines/ phrases contained throughout Katherine Larson’s poetry collection Radial Symmetry
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So many great movements here. I love “I’m suddenly aware/of what it means to be a body, /a mouth made for eating darkness.” Love “We swam through the night/like thirsty flowers,” and “to a point of pure blur, pure erasure.”
Thank you, Shaun.
Wow — would have had no idea that was cobbled from another’s lines, it flows that smoothly and coherently. Starts with that delicious line “Everywhere the spirits are hungry” to “furious fuming stars” this is so deftly put together.
Thanks, Bill.
also love the note of irresolution of the poem’s ending on the preposition “of”
Thanks, Gaby.
I really enjoyed this poem!
You are amazing, Poet!! Your work this June has been so inspiring and beautiful!
Thank you so much, Sylvia!
Very nice, Karen. I especially like the last stanza and the description of waking. That is such a magical time and you capture it well.
Thank you, Nancy!
Thank you, Alissa.
Love how you made these lines your own!
Woah! : “a mouth made for eating darkness.” And, “stretched backwards through time/inflamed by moonlight,”
Thank you!
So well-crafted, and these lines struck home!
a mouth made for eating darkness.
the crushed velvet of desire,
Aaaahhhhh. Thank you for sharing this!
Thank you!
Thank you!
You are such a master of these tricky forms, Karen! Speaking of which: I messaged you on Facebook Messenger. Please respond to me there with your email address, ok? I need your advice on an erasure.
Moving & poignant, expressing desire & loss in an amazing way. I especially like “the world is full of tiny trap.” And the last stanza is perfection.
Thank you, Taunja!