Let Lady Liberty Speak
pinprick domestic dagger-sewn stitch opens:
deep wound gash bleeds again
bloodsoaked stardust
drips dull shimmer
and I still illuminate
skies are falling–
rapidfire missile detonation
rains star spangled fire on foreign lands
no queens or kings may rule here (yet)
jesters and prisoners revel
in laughter and burning bush truth
that everyone claims to see in the dark
I listen for the trumpets’ call
as quaking earth rattles beneath
my trembling feet
jump!
I yearn to sratch & scale rather than wait
for walls to collapse from exhaustion
for standing as a fortress for too long
rescue is not coming
self-sutures will make do
with crimson-crusted punctures
that bear the weight of arrogant men’s mistakes
I wade in a harbor of tears
to remind passersby that revolution
will find me again
16 thoughts on "Let Lady Liberty Speak"
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I love how you move through different modes here for a perceptive shift at the line “I listen for the trumpets’ call…” and then you unify these perspectives and mirror back to “pinprick domestic dagger-sewn stitch opens.” Love:
“self-sutures will make do
with crimson-crusted punctures
that bear the weight of arrogant men’s mistakes”
Thank you, Shaun! I appreciate that you zoomed in on the perspective shift. Awesome!
“jesters and prisoners revel” — isn’t that the sad truth! Sadder still is that “rescue is not coming”. Nice one, H.A.
Thank you so much,Bill. Taking a few moments to view the statue at this moment in time is…oof…a lot. I really appreciate your comments. Thank you for reading.
I also love how on my first reading the speaker felt like the voice of the writer; on second reading, absorbing the title, the speaker was a personification of the ideal; on third reading, the speaker was the Statue of Liberty
Fabulous! Thank you so much, Gaby! 💜
Rescue is not coming — indeed! The poem is serious but the language is playful and creative. It provides a nice duality.
Many thanks, Linda. I am glad you read this and found the different elements work well in it.
Love the personification and how she picks up on the tone of today- great political poem of the times.
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate that you like this one, and that you see it having political poetic value. 💜
What all have said so just 👏👏👏
Thank you, Joseph.
I wade in a harbor of tears
So utterly relateable! All these feelings from the drastic surprises around us. Wonderful. You spoke for many of us. Thank you for writing and sharing this timely poem.
Thank you, E.E.
The difficulties we face seem to grow by the second. I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for reading.
Echo other comments before me.
Wowsers…the D and the S sounds and the rhythm and the images they “domestic dagger-sewn stitch opens:” and the Bs and rhythm “burning bush truth.”
Many thanks, Pam. I am glad you found the music in this one. 💜