The Magician
He shuffled her memory, a dealer with a deck of cards,
she watched unable to stop him as her awareness
became some one else’s mingled on a misty night.
Her voice was like the smooth silks of a jockey,
soft, colorful until he took it and locked it
in his heart as a bank teller with the coveted key.
A malodorous smell of time decayed
slid over her body like the runner rounding
third base, sliding into home plate.
It happened so fast she had no time to react,
feel swollen in the muddy driveway, laden
crust of red clay too heavy to run, like Lot’s wife.
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Enjoyed the various metaphors of magician, jockey silks, baseball player threaded in this story.
Thank you so much.
That first line is a jewel! Leads right into the cleverness of the poem. The title certainly adds another layer to the mix! A stray from your nature poems, but only a bit, since this is human nature! I have an image in my mind . . .
Thank you, Sylvia.
Yow! Terrific poem, and that last line is a killer.
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From the stunning first line this poem delivers until the last one. I can go in so many different directions with meaning…dementia tops the list.
Thank you, Pam. This means a lot.
Thank you for this admirable poem. Initially impressed with first stanza, then each successive stanza surpassed it. A work to study for its craft
Wow. Thank you for this validation of my writing. I appreciate it.
That last line is incredible and punctuates the piece so well.
Thanks for reading and validating. I appreciate it.