An Enigmatic Creature
In
the tattoo
parlor we talk about
seahorses. Who
knows how
we got there,
but I tell him
its the male who
gives birth. We find
a video on my phone,
watch one shoot hundreds
of nameless, aimless babies
out to sea. When he first came
home to reconcile, he said, Let’s go
get our wedding rings inked. Swore
the rumored affair never happened.
Foolish, how badly I wanted to believe
him, how I could almost convince myself
if I tried not to ask too many questions.
When he called to make appointments,
he booked his own, claimed to forget
about mine, then changed designs
and rode the impulse to festoon
all his knuckles instead. Just
turned the entire plan
on its head. But
I’m tired and
afraid to
needle core.
him at his
again, hole
so I sit gaping
there, from the
numb, of himself
and watch versions
him deliver divergent
endless
15 thoughts on "An Enigmatic Creature"
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This is so cool! And i liked the line about “needling” directly after mentioning tattoos.
a tour de force
Holy crap this is good. The shape, the language, the content! My hat is more than off to you, Chelsie—it’s floated away somewhere.
Beautifully crafted. This poem stings.
This the best shape poem I’ve ever seen! It’s content is stellar too. I’m so impressed.
What Kevin said! I also like you slipping in the “needle.” These picture poems are not easy, but I love the weave of seahorse and personal history.
Also a huge fan, Chelsie. I can’t imagine all the work it took to get this to take shape. So worth it. And, what a jerk.
Stunning
Wow! Everything about it is fantastic 🩷
Thanks, all! I was scared to attempt to recreate this here after trying unsuccessfully to upload it as an image. Glad the page was wide enough to hold a pregnant seahorse.
Wow, Chelsie. Even without it being a visual poem, it’s (as Wendy said) stunning, but adding the craft of making it a visual poem! Chef’s kiss! Thank you for sharing this.
Wow is right! This is phenomenal – form, words and content take my breath away.
Let me add my voice to the others before me. This poem is visually stunning (love how the curve of the seahorse’s tail contains betrayal) and speaks clear truth Love that the word ink and needle was used.
Outstanding, Chelsea!
Incredible, artful, and stunning. I love this–one of my favorites of yours this month!