Kit
She asked God for a baby – not a human
child, just some tender new
root of a thing to love. In the garden
she scooped up the helpless
furred creature found curled
among spring-green shoots,
never bothered to consider
whether it already had a mother.
What should we make of it now
that the blessing she named
and claimed has died in a box
under fluorescent lights?
How foolish to believe
simply getting what we want
always means an answered prayer.
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Oh, poor critter! And what an insightful and deep closing stanza. It’s always a pleasure reading your poems, Chelsie. Have a great rest of your summer!
Chelsie – My heart just loves this! Beautiful last stanza!
Chelsie –
Another clean, crisp, well-written poem from Chelsie! I love that last stanza. I love reading your poems every year.
Oh, the heartache! What a great poem, though. It’s been wonderful to read your poems this month.
the rhyme in “furred creature found curled” makes the creature feel so lovable
I like how the baby is renamed in most of the stanzas, ending with “blessing.”
This poem aches tenderness and loss and like, Nancy, love the renaming of baby as the poem moves forward.
Thank you for sharing your work and for being a part of the conversation about my work.
Terrific poem, Chelsie. That last stanza is devastating.
A skillful poem outlining that condition of wishful thinking meeting unintended consequence.
Truths 🫂💔
Very tender and heartfelt. enjoyed your poems all month!
Chelsie, your work this month has been so fantastic! I’ve loved seeing what you had to share.
Thank you for submitting many thoughtful and well written poems!