Number Eight
I’m eight,
and this may be my favorite number,
I think to myself.
My maternal grandma knocks
on the door of the bathroom,
“Sweetie, come along; we’ll be late.”
At twenty-eight,
I became a naturalized US citizen.
Eight months later
my mom received her green card.
After eight weeks of planning and packing,
to visit my sweet nana in the upcoming summer,
it will be nearly eighteen years
for mom since she last saw her mother…
But then, we receive the news:
“Your grandma has passed away; I’m sorry.”
I freeze.
Everything grows unmoving and quiet,
like the Dead Sea, in which
I was floating only last year
at this time of the year.
After a moment of quiet stillness,
the salty tears come pouring out of my eyes,
enough to form two more seas.
Eight is now my least favorite number.
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Again, I am so sorry for your loss! You and your mom were so close to reuniting in person with her!
May the number eight one day return to its happy reminder of your nana.
This poem–devastating events, but devastatingly beautiful. Your nana would be proud. Of this. Of you.
Thank you so much, Michele! I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and your continued kind and supportive comments! 💛
Deeply emotional. Sorry for your loss. I can sense the closeness and love between you and your grandmother.
Thank you so much, Virginia! I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and for your feedback.
A moving and sorrowful poem. “Tears… enough to form two more seas” beautifully describes your loss. I’m so sorry.
Thank you so much, Rosemarie!
Tears your heart out.
Thank you, Wayne, for taking the time to read my poem!
Heartbreaking and beautiful. Hope, like Michele that the pain will ease and #8 will be your favorite again. You honor all.
Thank you so much, Pam!