Dear Woman Next Door
Inspired by today’s poems on perspectives and potions
We knew you were a witch
But we was young
And sure of everything
We saw you in the shops
Hair disguised as a taut bun
Churchlike green-patterned dress
You didn’t fool us
A dark cape and wildness
Waited at home for your return
You kept a dog named Merlin
A cranky brown blob of fluff
That sniffed and waddled the yard
But we had heard about
A black cat’s power
When you swept your porch
We recognized the old straw broom
Had seen you riding it
Shadowed against the moon
We heard you crooning over plants
An herb garden my mother called it
But we understood the spells
Of mugwort and sage
My thoughts bumped into you tonight
As I sat at the table with my tea
Brushing hair grey as ashes
The moon singing outside my window
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Stunning combo– confession and homage.
I love the visuals and there’s a touch of the Wizard of Oz. I know Dorothy wore her blue gingham, not a green pattern.
But you got to appreciate how Merlin echoes Toto.
“I already told you. I’m not a witch at all…”
“But we was young” is what first makes me question who is being addressed. The last couple of lines confirms it, like Tabitha aptly said–confession and homage.
This poem is like skipping a stone across the river, watching the ripples fan out. A story with many places, at once mysterious and familiar, ethereal and tangible.
Oh, that last line!!! I appreciate the whole poem, but oh, that last line!
Oh my goodness I love this so much!
Striking poem, a bit mysterious as befits the topic. Whiffs of old Salem and of ashes…