Hidden Architecture
The world rewards appetite.
For youth.
For beauty.
For novelty.
It teaches us
to mistake wanting
for love.
Yet there is something deeper.
A well beneath the river.
A root beneath the blossom.
A cathedral beneath the stone.
And when you see me—
the hidden architecture,
the dark water,
the unfinished places—
and choose to stay,
I think that is the closest thing
to grace I know.
Because attraction
is merely the eye.
But recognition—
recognition is the soul
refusing to leave.
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I love this poem!!!! the last two stanzas…perfection!
Thank you!
This is such a beautiful and wise poem. I especially love the final stanza — the way you distinguish between attraction being ‘merely the eye’ and recognition as ‘the soul refusing to leave’ is so moving and true. The whole piece feels like a quiet meditation on real love and grace. Really well done.
Thank you. I finished it quickly and still feel it needs something more. I appreciate your feedback.
Great metaphors and very poetic!
Thank you, John!