she dreams she is saved
in a country house
a gathering of friends
warm stone hearth
shadowy fire moving
a mother searching
the firelight finds
her lost boy
and dreams she is saved
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the first stanza sets the mood for journey inward in the second stanza
Oh, now, Jules. What are you trying to do to me?
Thanks, Kevin. Your own work is so instructive to me.
Who’s crying? I’m crying. I loved this pared down style.
Thanks Linda. I’m trying to learn.
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I love the indirection