Filigree
pretty tongue silver
forked, flicks, tickles
your ear illustrious, glints
hypnotic songs, beats
a rhythm your
tympanic membrane
can get behind
entrancing
like a snake coiled up
in a basket, in a tree
making eye contact –
go on and grab it,
break it, bend it, bite it
off, why don’t you,
next time it strikes or flits
out of your own mouth
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I love the rhythm and sounds here. The end certainly has some bite!
Yikes this is good. So yummy, with a bitter aftertaste.
Wow! Killer ending.
Wow, word tickle,then it scolds and then it educates.
Great turn !!!!
powerful
this one really bites
delicate
unexpected killer ending
I agree with comments about the twist at the end. Love that!
The sounds capture me immediately: silver/forked, flicks, tickles/your ear…”