The Roses Had the Look
And the unseen eyebeam crossed, for the roses
Had the look of flowers that are looked at.
There they were as our guests, accepted and accepting.
— T. S. Eliot, Burnt Norton
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The roses had the look
of flowers that are looked at –
bruised thumbprints on their necks
where someone stopped to smell and smile.
One was a wound,
open under a band aid;
one was a thorn
in the flesh of the night;
one shivering,
the gray arm of the wind
wrapped around her waist;
one with petals like knees
freshly scraped against the gravel.
All blushing like actors
caught mid-scene,
unsure if the applause was coming.
Beneath the floral skin,
a throb –
a secret pulse that
blooms and blinks
under the gaze,
like a held breath
waiting for the next one
to press close and say
they know the type
quite well.
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That second stanza carries so much weight. May the flowers eventually find gentler hands to hold them.
I really enjoyed the tone of this: lived the final stanza
Excellent!
…gray arm of the wind/wrapped around her waist
…. they know the type
quite well…
You make them living,
alive…