Helper
Last year my wife went to an Al-Anon meeting.
One boho, twenty-something waif asked,
“You’re a helper too aren’t you?”
Infuriated, Bea issued divorce
papers immediately. Ten days
before our girl’s birthday.
Children are adaptable.
Reportedly resilient & capable
of cleaning up crime scenes
between fair to firmly consenting adults.
But if the question were between
helping you, or leaving you to bleed,
they’d rather not
face that their special person is weak—
their motto being, no one left behind.
My baby, Treena, found me once,
boiled as an owl, black
hair soaked with coagulate gore.
I wore Better Homes & Gardens
across my swollen, rattling throat.
The pages sticking with phlegm.
Treena mused
whether Dark Father needed stitches,
ointment, or immediate intubation. Since
Her Mommy was out for the day, she knew
she’d have to find needle, thread, &
appropriate herbal applications alone.
Smiling, she whispered, nappy time is a happy time.
She decided to make her breakfast by herself.
Pancakes with maple syrup topped with strawberries
& cream. It was easy! She made
the batter with peanut butter, ripe bananas,
plus selected berries from the garden.
She washed them,
picked them clean to plop a dollop of Redi-Whip
upon them. A dream.
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Manny, how are you this great?? This is such a heavy subject in many ways and you manage to twist it, make it playful and very enjoyable. I am like always – impressed!
I always say, “If you haven’t worked an ER or ICU….”
I love you E.
“The Child is father of the Man”
generational!
THIS!!!!!
This line sticks it’s fingers in my throat. Wow. You are already writing your tail off and it’s only day six. Great treatment of this concept.
” nappy time is a happy time. “
Thank you brother
Totally terrific.
You’re a master at drawing a scene of heartbreaking beauty
Thanks for reading zZ VT.
Great one, Manny. Dark and tender, a rare combo.
And it’s in tercets.
The way you create a scene is awe-inspiring, Manny. I especially like
“Children are adaptable.
Reportedly resilient & capable
of cleaning up crime scenes”
and that last stanza is WOW! Amazing write.
Danke schön.
The use of “Reportedly” here says so much.
This section truly sets the tone, a foreshadowing.
Absolutely beautiful and gut-wrenching and touching.
The childlike whimsy “plop a dollop of Redi-Whip” in the darkness of the piece. Really nice.
thank you so very much
Nappy time is a happy time— that’s funny but in this context it broke my heart. Brutal, Manny.
Same… Absolutely, the same.
It’s like the mafia kiss in Godfather II.
Love the way you slip back and forth from the child’s voice and the serious situation so seamlessly!
Also sharing the love for your craft. This knocked my proverbial socks off. Love:
Children are adaptable.
Reportedly resilient & capable
of cleaning up crime scenes
&& the “cream…/…dream” inrhyme