* First, Saturday
There are no cloudy
Saturdays—
polish the planets love, spirals
out of the ground…I walk with grace.
Singing life is stirring in the ether,
I recall how the heartthrob of spring
a string, (between my forehead)
reclined in beach chairs
eating ice cream, pen in hand.
Divine intervention: this lithe body.
Reach for me in the present tense,
putting my dreams to bed.
These tired, (think hologram)
passports from other worlds
gentle, rain-made, Sunday
morning still.
You’re different
when—the funneling tail finally touches ground.
* A Cento,
consisting of the first full lines from the initial eighteen
consisting of the first full lines from the initial eighteen
poems in Mike Wilson’s newly released book, Before the Fall.
15 thoughts on "* First, Saturday"
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I find the confluence of these lines exciting. What a find.
Yay!!! It worked. Thanks Manny
some of Mike’s surreal quality lingers in your poem
His book is just wonderful.
Thanks for seeing the intent.
Gotta love a good Cento, but this one is phenomenal! Yes and yes!
Lol……I’ll take phenomenal……lolol
It reflects ro the source……his book is too.
Thanks H.
“Reach for me in the present tense,/
putting my dreams to bed.”
What a beautiful combination.
Yeah Sarah, it’s my second favorite combination of the whole project.
Thanks.
Incredible. Just wow.
Thanks Bill…. this small thing is my way of thanking Mike for sharing his amazing gift.
Had me at “There are no cloudy/Saturdays—”
Yessss “Reach for me in the present tense/putting my dreams to bed.”
I mostly had it together on Thursday but held it for today…..lol…..first Saturday and the wordsmyths be a-frolikin already……:-) thanks for reading
Starting to wonder what you CAN’T do, Coleman.
Wow. It’s really interesting to me because I know where the line breaks are in the original poems and see how you’ve created something that’s its own thing with its own meaning but still smells a little bit like me. I really like it and am honored to feel part of it
Love the movement of your cento from line to line, discovering the connections and leaps! BTW, I’m just starting a cento for LEXPOMO. I love writing centos.