This Too
We won’t always be this way,
trudging through days of rain
with the world we thought we knew
turned upside down in the puddles at our feet,
draining into the gutters.
One day the rain will let up
& just like the little girl said,
the sun’ll come out
& we’ll remember what a clear day looks like
& can look like again.
We’ll remember to look up from the sidewalk
& greet our neighbors as we pass,
say hello, say how are you,
& listen for the answer,
whatever it is.
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I sure hope so. Kevin.
Me and you both, Jerielle.
Such a fine, optimistic poem to start the day with. Last two lines are wonderful.
Thanks Bill!
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🙏🙏🙏
Have noticed a trend this year.
More than others, I mean. For many of us, as the days passed.
Thank you for this one today, Kevin.
You’re welcome, Joseph! I’ve been enjoying your poems this past week.
perfect title, appreciate the indirection
Thanks Gaby! I worried a bit that some folks might not get my meaning here, but my sense is that mostly they do. Whether they agree with the message is another question.
There’s a great song by Patti Griffin, “Oh, Heavenly Day!” I’m singing it! Good work.
& just like the little girl said,
the sun’ll come out & we’ll remember what a clear day looks like/
& can look like again.
Thanks darlin!
❤️……..watched the sunrise over the lake this morning and then found this. ❤️
Thanks for writing
Thanks for sharing.
Glad to be of service, Coleman 😏
So very well put: “the world we thought we knew/turned upside down in the puddles at our feet,/draining into the gutters.”
Grateful for the hope in the last stanza.
Thanks Pam!
good metaphor and love the ending – and listen for the answer, whatever it is
Thanks Mike!
The title works beautifully here, very nice
Thanks ND!
Great poem
and
I hope you’re right
Thanks Jim! And me too.
Sounds like a good plan
❤️
I think this is never far off, Kevin.
My fellow optimist!
Thanks for this snippet of hope! We need all we can get!
I aim to serve, Linda 😏
Love a good optimist in the morning.
In times like these, for sure.
This poem is a necessary reminder. I needed to hear “& can look like again.” Yes
Thanks Shaun!
Who knows? Maybe you’re right!
It would be nice, wouldn’t it?
I love the turn this poem makes when it goes from the rain to our outlook. Great poem, Kevin!
Thanks Nancy!
Very hopeful! May you be a prophet.
Thanks!
Very clever line here Kevin,
‘with the world we thought we knew
turned upside down in the puddles at our feet,
draining into the gutters.’
love that.
Thanks Jeremy!
Great metaphor. The hope we need.
Thanks Carole!
“the world we thought we knew
turned upside down in the puddles at our feet,”
What an image! I love it. Thanks for sharing!