Spring Leaving
I.
Rain greens the leaving,
drops like needles prickling skin.
The path still beckons.
II.
Still drops, skin needles,
leaving greens the prickling path,
beckons like the rain.
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Marvelous! Who’s the rock star now?
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Well crafted.
The double use of “prickling”
sequences it nicely.
They bounce