Under a Tree
Balming breeze meets a chair set in mulch
making bearable the summerfying air–
a ritual of writing has been resumed.
Though the body’s sore from eight hours of working
the mind’s a buzzing hive of ideas
just waiting to see what sentiments will grow.
I’m feeling antsy
maybe because they keep descending
from the branches like tiny bombers.
Wouldn’t you like to have the durability of an ant
immune to terminal velocity,
able to fall from any height unscathed?
I’m going to drink an ant someday
because it will have taken a swim in my beverage
and I won’t know it’s there
until it’s tumbling along my tongue.
But I try not to think about that too much–
for all I know it’s already happened.
Something else is needling me
like the pine’s gentle rain of miniscule missiles.
Goals not yet achieved and stories not yet told.
Seems a cat’s stolen my tongue from the ants
unless it’s just some catkins
licking me from above.
Then a grenade of a pinecone
skips across the bill of my hat
with the reminder that healing is war
and I’m a goddamn super-soldier. I know this
from everything the trees keep throwing at me.
Was that a tick I just flicked away?
Aw shucks, I’m starting to get sappy now
or maybe it’s the giant glob that dropped
into my flip-flop while my foot was free.
Now the bottom of my sole is sticky;
unpleasant, but what can you do? It’s risk assumed
from habitually seeking serenity
sitting under the trees.
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Serenity is hard to find.
Under a tree is a good place to start.
Philip, everyday you put out these
wonderful poems.
Bright sunshine, a cool breeze, the trees is there for so many peaceful moments. Thank you so much for yor kind words!
I really like the metaphors in this poem, Philip. The ant analogy is great in your quest for serenity.
I owe this poem to months of ants that have found their way onto me. Thank you for your thoughts.
Ilove it! It made me laugh. I can picture the glob falling onto your flip flop. Good poem! It’s great to be reading your work once again!
Likewise, my friend! That fortuitously unfortuitous glob was a huge help. Thank you for taking the time to read!
The alliteration is delicious here. Shows how the speaker is immersed in and part of the natural world. I love your playful choices. Killer.
Thank you so much, Phebe! Playful is not something I’m able to achieve often in my poetry, so it’s good to see it landed.
Your poem rings true, Philip. Admirable dedication expressed here while encountering various obstacles “under a tree”: “ a ritual of writing has been resumed.” Impressive use of concrete imagery: “Something else is needling me / like the pine’s gentle rain of miniscule missiles.” Your poems continue to teach me craft every day. Thank you for sharing
As evidenced by the poem, the tree had many things to share with me. Thank you so much for reading and giving kind words!
Such thoughtful word choices! I love the playful tone.
This is great writing Philip. Crystal clear, nicely punctuated, and every word doing work.