2. A Fish Tale, Sheer Pleasure
I caught a pacific blue marlin once.
It was big, very big.
We couldn’t even get it in the boat.
The captain jumps down from the bridge
and fits the butt of the pole into the gimbal
attached to the chair, quickly jumps back
up. Gripping the spotless silver wheel, he
starts the turn. We get turned and start
the chasing. I’m trying to get as much of
that thick, dripping blue-green leash back
on the reel’s drum as fast as I can, twist the
suddenly smooth glide of this elite machine
in my hands. They are built for this moment.
The captain yells, You ready? Breath-ing-ly-
I-yell-, Go! And now we’re turning, and we’re,
Oh! Shit! As soon as we get three quarters
ass-backed to that fish, the rod bends double,
breaks the gimbal out of the bracket and
I am latched to a pole with a giant reel that
begins howling. The fish is stealing-line,
it zips through the immaculate glinting eyes
on the thick moaning red and white rod.
My arms are gonna come out of their sockets,
or I’m going swimming. My dilemma now: I’m
brass-snapped to this reel and a long thin piece
of thread tying me to the biggest thing I have
never yet, seen in my life and then, A GRANDER!
Now, I will say, this fish doesn’t look at all that
big, but we know she has at least a half-mile of
line out and I am certain she just winked at me,
but maybe the light just hit her eye wrong. She!
So I scream with everything I’m not using to hang
on to the pole, the reel, the chair and my sanity,
You are Mine! Also, loud as I can, Chase!
The boat begins westing toward Maui again.
* Editor: Jules Unsel
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Woah…the fish tale has grown…
Lol, “I am certain she just winked at me,”
😉
You had me in the boat with you! lol
Pleasure to have you aboard Linda 😀
I am loving these fishing stories, Coleman. There is so much going on but you manage to make the scene come through so clearly. Exhilarating!
Thank you Jeremy.
Im getting a lot of help from my writers group with this story.
Working on the next one 😀
What a tale! What a fight! The poem keeps the heart pumping and I am on the edge of my seat.
I really enjoyed “Now, I will say, this fish doesn’t look at all that
big, but we know she has at least a half-mile of
line out and I am certain she just winked at me,
but maybe the light just hit her eye wrong. She!”
Awesome poem!
Thanks for reading along with this H.A., this memory has been marinating for a long time.
This is a sport totally alien to me, but (pardon the pun) I am hooked. Like friend Pam, I love: “I am certain she just winked at me,”
Thank you for reading Greg. 😉
Lolol….she winked isbfun for me too…lol
The story continues. I enjoy your fishing poems.
You were in my thoughts.
Im working on the ending with a nod toward the fisherman himself.
😀
Boom! Bam! Boom! This flies off the page in a spray of salt water. Congrats to you and Jules.
Also: I’m glad to know how cathartic this poem is for you. It’s a great example of what poetry can do for writers (and readers): dig up old cargo and scrape off barnacles and then throw that stuff back into the sea, where it belongs.
Thank-you so much my dear friend. From the two skys ❤️
We’ll see if this guy can land this big fish.
He can land it Coleman.
❤️ Team effort.
Hemingway’s old man has nothing on you. When is a fish just a fish? If he makes it to paper, he’s always more. You made it more.
Oh! Joe !!! I’ll take that and cherish.
It means the world. Thank you for reading and we are working on number 3 now……we’ll see if this kid can get this fish in the boat 😀 thank you !!
Yes. Or maybe Melville’s M.D.
Your tail becomes a tale.
Thank you Jim!!!! I kind of gave it away at the beginning which.
Forecastling as it were ……lololol
” the low… sun also rises…”
Thank you so much for reading !!
We’ll do our best not to mess up the ending.
Something so intriguing about old fishermen and their tales!
True! isn’t it neat, thats what is funny and now that I’m getting closer to getting old …..i get it.
They tell the stories because they are like splinters in the mind and have to be surgically removed.
Its so cool how that works. Thanks for reading along 😀
I sense a chapbook in the making. You hooked my interest, Coleman, just like you hooked that marlin.
Omg thank you Lee.
And thanks for commenting.
It’s only gonna be four pages for now. But that’s because there are only 30 days and there are poems.
Lol……that was a full stop. 😆
I read the other day that in Hemmingways book a full 50 pages are dedicated to the blur so ……maybe extend it…..just the suggestion from a writer like you is a huge compliment. Thank you
what a saga!
Thanks Mike……almost done with #3
This is so great, Coleman. Your descriptions of the line and reel and gimbal sold me — then the wink that sent me howling. Wonderful work.
Thanks for reading and commenting Bill. Yeah when the gimbal goes……well, this is a p.g. story 😉
Living with you as wrote this epic saga was also an epic saga!