Insecure Man Considers his Wife’s Second Career as a Psychiatric Nurse
Beautiful dreamer, head in the clouds,
soon waking to take on the worst
the world can throw into wards
and lockdown, wounded birds
in padded cages.
Dressed an angelic hue,
toaster waffle edges browned,
a daub of blush, smear of gloss,
now you’re ready to be the man,
a role for which we never planned.
Knowing the sixteen ways to disable
and diffuse, only having to use
one or two to keep me working
the vacuum to get at the cat
hair beneath the significant chair,
so different from retail you,
the one before this second calling.
Bravely, bravely you plow ahead
into those chaotic rooms
while I consider window streaks,
the rising cost
of store bought tomatoes,
left behind to ponder
what’s come over you,
and what, my love, will become of us.
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his admiration for the challenges the wife takes on is triggering the speaker’s self-doubt. a specific state beautifully rendered. love the candor
I share Gaby’s sentiments. This poem is tender and heartfelt. I especially love this:
“wounded birds
in padded cages.”
Bill, your poem is stunning. I’ve really enjoyed reading your work this June. Keep ’em coming!
I need to meet Mrs. Brymer. Perhaps she can give me some free psychiatric advice 😏
Beautiful poem.
I enjoyed this so much.
Everyday I can’t wait
to read what you bring.
You’re a damn good story
teller with a deep knowledge
of poetic form.
Love the contrasts you draw! You have the magic touch of words. And you’re a house husband (bonus!)
A brutally, yet lovingly, honest poem. I promise, all will be well. Just hold up your end of the responsibilities.
I love the tenderness here, defined by the lines “Bravely, bravely you plow ahead/into those chaotic rooms…”
This poem is tender and brave and so honoring of the relationship between man and woman “Knowing the sixteen ways to disable/and diffuse, only having to use/one or two to keep me working /the vacuum to get at the cat/hair beneath the significant chair,/so different from retail you,/the one before this second calling.”
Bill, I love how the tone is loving but unsettled in this piece. A fear that your partner’s growth might leave you behind, even as you cheer them on. Wonderfully expressed.
This poem is a tribute to an honored profession. Great write… bringing in that second profession…
I love the contrast between “beautiful dreamer…a daub of blush, smear of gloss” and the “worst the world can throw into wards.” Your wife sounds tough! But sometimes the toughest are also the most gentle!
such a beautiful relationship poem!