Words Like Falling
I started skydiving
because I loved the idea
of freedom.
-Felix Baumgartner
plunging and plummeting…
tumbling and dropping…
i quite like
having my feet
on the ground
a safe soft earth
can’t shatter
my bones
if i never dare
to fly
descending tailspin
nosedive crashing
but a safe soft earth
is also one
that doesn’t turn
i can be okay with that
until i’m not
stumbling slipping tripping
toppling flopping plopping
it’s easy to deflect
when she’s a bartender
who doesn’t date her customers
or when i meet her at the time clock
and she doesn’t go out with coworkers
but what about the girl
who is neither of those things
slumping keeling
crumpling
she exposes
a deeper level
of damage
yet unprocessed
a new way to fall
depleting decaying degrading
devalued deteriorated regressed
a trauma of rejection
that still entraps
the emptiness within
expanding infinitely
i’m adrift
in my own cosmos
where did the earth go
safe soft earth
diminishing decreasing declining
do i just not exist in the skies of others
does my light never reach distant worlds
how can i keep watching planets collide
while floating in the midst of space
completely untouched
lost given up
i see you and think
that’s such a long fall
i’ll never survive
better to retreat
preserve potential
over definitive denial
but is that
life
is that living
i have to jump
and what if she says no
like all the rest
then we splat
then we start healing wounds
rebuild courage
climb back up
find a new place to jump
and we jump
we leap
we spring
we dive
as many times as it takes
until we find home
no longer bound by fear
safe soft earth
i quite like
having my feet
on the ground
9 thoughts on "Words Like Falling"
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Yes! Gotta keep falling, indeed. You create awesome interstitial moments here with the italicized stanzas. The lack of capitalization and punctuation add to the sense of falling down through the poem’s revelations. And then one feels the landing of the ending. It’s a satisfying, earned stasis. Cheers.
Thank you, Phebe. Between work and travel, I had a really hard time putting this together, so I’m very grateful to know it landed. Cheers!
This one pulls you right into the drop with that skydiving frame. A smart way to make the fear of emotional free-fall feel physical and immediate. I like how you told this one Philip, thanks for sharing!
And thank you for commenting! You all keep me wanting to do my best, making the effort so rewarding. I appreciate that a lot!
There was a moment when I was furious. Sickened. Saddened. But not because I’s been left for dead in a foreign country.
Because I knew given enough time, and the right person, I’d believe again.
My dude. You hit it on the head:
“then we splat
then we start healing wounds
rebuild courage
climb back up
find a new place to jump”
Because eventually, you fly.
Felt and loved this.
P.S. You do fly.
Joseph, you always have such beautiful and encouraging things to say. I’m also glad you highlighted the ‘splat’ stanza. It was a huge part of me figuring out how to pull this poem together. Thank you so so so much for comment
So evocative, so much truth. And yes, even thought there may be a splat, we lose if we don’t try and try.
So much wisdome there. Thank you so much Mary for sharing your thoughts!