The Caterpillar
tickles on my hands
my heart a broken cocoon
hanging from the porch
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tickles on my hands
my heart a broken cocoon
hanging from the porch
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nice pivot
with the point of view
Thank you, Jim.
You packed an entire emotional arc into three lines.
I raised a caterpillar as a child. It was an emotional time.
Jaz, I concur with Jeremy, three meaningful lines.
Thank you, John.