mellow scene
one door the wife asked for,
saturday, the part of her that coils,
water and pink brick,
and raymond’s hand at the peephole
like a man warming himself beside what he’s burning.
she soaps her breast,
green below the waterline, unread.
nothing has happened yet,
and she is still hers, by a brushstroke.
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Wow wow wow! Such an expert bit of ekhphrasis.
Line 6 blew me away.
thank you, what is erased on the manuscript page says a lot. 🍈 🐍
I meant to say line 5
Wow! So restrained but says so much.
thank you
Joining the previous wows, Wowx3.
Love: “and she is still hers, by a brushstroke.”
thank you 🧜♀️