Men at the Mechanic’s Wake
These come: soft-handed men in suits,
acquaintances who never smelled
my father’s grease-smeared work clothes.
They talk loud with one another,
shake hands, slap backs like candidates
at the barbeque fundraiser.
They toil at polished desks in cuff-
linked shirts, play golf at private clubs
on lawns of bottle green, float down
the Tennessee in canopied
pontoon boats for football games.
And these come: sons of sawmillers,
cattle and tobacco farmers. The sun
has ironed their necks, spotted
their foreheads. Their ropy arms hang
from short-sleeved shirts their wives
have pressed in kitchens smelling of bacon.
They’d rather be in worksheds crammed
with busted machines, paint cans stacked
like pyramids, jelly jars jammed
with tenpennies, sinkers, and bolts
that ground their lives against leaving.
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Accute observations of both groups. I know which bunch I’d rather stand with.
Oh god, the music and pain here
You gave such excellent portraits of both types of men- love your observation skills.
Your choices for details and the decision to structure the poem in halves like this work well to frame and support the meanings and emotions I think you intend here.
Space and time both seem to separate the men. Those in the second stanza may know those in the first well enough. Not sure about the reverse.
An apparent nostalgia in the poem for a pastoral world many of us still long for adds poignancy. So well done.
Marianne -Always amazing! Sharp personalities on display drawn by a deft hand. Love “The sun/has ironed their necks,”
“ironed” as both reddened and stiffened. You so good!
❤️
What saltmeridian said.
Love: “soft-handed men in suits” and “sun/has ironed their necks”
What a lovely poem! I especially like
“The sun has ironed their necks.”
I so love this poem and especially “from short-sleeved shirts their wives/
have pressed in kitchens smelling of bacon.” Each detail is so recognizable.