skipping affliction
I’m sick with these
sour assumptions of
just what vinegar’s willing
to bend in the face
of a frenzied driver,
fizzling envy of old
Lao tzu now sated, at last,
with saying the world is exactly that
or this—should it make any difference—i hear
the thrush song
broken Dvorak dandled
to bristling symphony
seized in the seizing
sole, stuck smudging
American soil to something
more than mere tantruming amber—i hear
the thrush song
threshing the feathers
and firs for what
we’ll conclude
was the other
some armchair
songster splintered
in prose—i hear
the thrush song
tucked in toddlers’
toes tapped, rapping
the morse code codas of
forebears frantically
thrashing at slackening
seams, to cinch or sleave or
free or aggrieve them, sour
assumptions thumbing the putty-
grey lip of a glib passerby like snow
shocks box homes into Dickensian
hamlets or somebody, spluttering, teases at
trauma or shell-shock, God
only knows what
excitement just might
summon such a skipping affliction
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I love the way you used repetition to layer meaning here. My favorite part is “i hear/the thrush song /broken Dvorak…”
Thank you! I was in an airport in Houston, the smaller one I guess, and, while on a layover, this string quartet, the Apollo String Quartet, miraculously gave a free concert. It was a suite of pieces by Dvorak, written during his time in these United States, and the first violinist gave a little spiel before a particular movement about how Dvorak, so homesick for Czechoslovakia, was comforted by the song of (if I recall correctly) a thrush. He wrote the whole piece surrounding its song outside of his window in Iowa, I think. That always stuck with me, only to appear here in this poem about seeking joy where you can. To seek an affliction of skipping, perchance.
Thats really cool to get that insight! Thank you! One of my dear friends is a string instrumentalist and he shared with me his love for how Dvorak brought those folk/traditional music elements into his compositions for sure!
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