The Original “I”
Long before Horace, women wrote
in self-reflection on their arts.
Let’s take Enheduanna, 2300 BCE,
she etched in clay mí-dug₄-ga—
splendid utterances— in her hymns,
her poetry, of the birth of a poem
like the birth of a child:
Painful. Long. Ending in bliss.
Oh— and our Enheduanna
ripped from her body the very first “I,”
the “I” of ourselves known
through our very own poems.
And then, of course, as women do
after a long day of work,
she brought home crescent-shaped moon cakes—
and fried it all up in a pan.
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Of course she did! Love the history and how you developed the poem.
ripped from her body the very first “I,”
the “I” of ourselves known
through our very own poems. – Yes!!
Second Sylvia!
Yesss….”ripped from her body the very first “I,”
the “I” “
I love ancient history! Well done with this and centering on Enheduanna and her important role. Empowering.
Words of power and purpose.
So so splendid. Love the movement and linework and revelations in this piece and that end is perfect. Fantastic piece.
This is fascinating – and made all the more memorable through the senses of smell and taste that are engaged with that scrumptious ending!
This is lovely and powerful!
Agree with all the comments above! Lovely writing.
That last stanza, subtle yet so powerful and true!