Remembering is an old woman’s gin
I have to touch you to know if you’re real.
Have you found God yet in these Catholic halls
adorned with saints and half melted candles?
In the alcove by Mother Mary, the priest speaks
and the tongues of the departed wag behind him.
Is he deaf to you who linger like the sharp point of a quill
without a pot of ink to make your message known?
I dreamed your father set my shoes out for me.
He polished and shined the brown leather,
gave them new laces and offered to slip them on my feet
if only I’d sit down and stay with you both.
How did he find me here, walking next to you
asking questions about your life,
asking why you had taken so long to come home.
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My dear Alissa, this is a lovely sonnet!
I wrote it in my dream. Before it faded I set it down here.
the title adds a delicious tension common in dreams
Thank you. The title came after I had the first few lines. Seemed to fit.
Wonderful poem and a great title!
Thank you so much!☺️
The title! A great poem, Alissa.
Thank you, Linda.
Wonderful, Alissa! One of my favorite poems of yours this month.
High praise. Thank you!
Love the title and this question “Is he deaf to you who linger/ like the sharp point of a quill/without a pot of ink to make your message known?”
Thank you, 🙏
So much to enjoy here. I loved the image “and the tongues of the departed wag behind him.” Followed by the tongues of shoes later
I’m so glad you enjoyed it.