Point of Transition
cross threshold
enter poem point of transition
poem changes you like a seed nurtured into sunflower
all it asks of you is to listen
then live with it
for you are not the same person
who stood outside the door
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💛 Thanks, Coleman
Such a powerful message in soft, touching imagery. Absolutely stunning, L.
The shape works perfectly here.
Thank you, H.A., for your close reading and supportive words. Such confirmation from a writer who knows
apt metaphor “like a seed nurtured into sunflower”
True honor to be validated by a gifted writer.. Grateful to you, Gaby
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especially love “all it asks of you is to listen”
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Kind words from an accomplished poet. Thank you, Pam
So true! This is one of those to hang nect to where I write: “cross threshold
enter poem”
Wow! High praise from a consummate poet. Thank you, Shaun
Larry,
the transformations are incredibly deep it was fun to walk with you in this process . . . your words my flashlight! Thank you!
Happy it resonated with you and created a meaningful experience. Thank you for your kindness, Darlene