Her Next Line?
Speaking of Horace, he was a good man,
as far as we can see—
the son of a freed slave, who walked crowded
basalt Roman streets, pungent in their offense,
but guided by his father’s watchful eyes—
he the child, then the man, glancing back.
I do not know why I think of him again today—
his poetry lasts.
We have his words, and though I wish
for more than one complete poem
from Sappho, her lost work, a tragedy
of her lost dialect—
her full verses and lyre now only echoing
on the Aegean Sea,
I must give Horace his due. Appreciate
his lasting breaths:
Now if I speak more freely than you like
And seem too prone to laughter, surely you
Can grant a little license here. I learned
This habit from the very best of fathers.*
Was his philosophy richer for that parent’s patient,
steady shadow?
I look at my own hand and pen—
a lack of similar shadow—
and ask: what would my life have been
if I had had his luck?
More vital to me now—
what will my own daughter write of me?
*from Horace’s Satire 1.4
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I enjoyed this
I too mourn the loss of Sappho’s work. I have read the breakdown of her verse form based on fragments, tried to write in it…I’d rather tackls a sestina! LoL
Michele, love this layered wonderful poem, especially the tie to present and future “I look at my own hand and pen—
a lack of similar shadow—” and “More vital to me now—
what will my own daughter write of me?”
A creative use of Horace’s poetry! I love: “Was his philosophy richer for that parent’s patient,/steady shadow? “
I think her next line might be, “Damn, she’s the very best of mothers!” (And a wonderful poet as well!)
I love how you connect Horace to the present in this poem, not least of which through your musings about your daughter.
That ending really hit me in the gut. Wow!
And you’re right to question that. What will our children say of us?
And I’m with Greg that “Was his philosophy richer for that parent’s patient,\steady shadow?” was beautifully written.
Historical, self-reflective, questioning, present and future. Your work covers a writing journey. Last few lines-brilliant.