Goldfinch Sonnet
Birds gather outside my window—wren,
cardinal, grackle. In the past, I didn’t know
they were there. Now I wait for them,
how close they come. Robins are most
common with their rust orange bellies.
Yesterday the first goldfinch
perched on the deck, a plump sun.
I’m not sure what it means,
a rare bird—so comfortable here.
After my stroke, I notice
small feathered creatures. I seem
to attract them like a pond of magic.
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Lovely! Small feathered creatures and a pond of magic.
It’s a beautiful poem, Linda. And the sonnet is the perfect choice of form. They say people who are deaf or blind find their other senses get stronger to compensate. Perhaps something like that is true of you. Something metaphysical.
your heightened awareness to the world around you comes across in the details
😆…..wow…..lololololololololololol
my love, ” i think im gonna try a sonnet ”
Lolol……OMG you are amazing.
This is fantastic !!!
Beautiful sonnet that gives tribute to our winged friends. The gold finch is a gorgeous gift to witness. More will visit.
This whole poem
is a pond of magic.
Yes! Magical poem.
I agree— the sonnet is the perfect choice for this poem.
I especially love this:
“I’m not sure what it means,
a rare bird—so comfortable here.”
A ‘pond of magic’ for sure!
This beautiful poem is like watching a miracle unfold “I’m not sure what it means,
a rare bird—so comfortable here.”
Love pond of magic!
You ARE a pond of magic, as this poem demonstrates. ❤️
The “plump sun” is part of the magic of this sonnet, but the ending surely came off the tip of a wand!
a plump sun and pond of magic — WOW!
What a gorgeous sonnet. Those last three lines!
Birds know kind hearts!