Caress
He’s kissed by the desert air,
buffeted in the night over peaks
and into landing, homecoming.
The mountains also remember him,
with a cool kiss in the morning air.
The beloved too recalls a kiss
with a poem and a promise,
Brokeback Mountain
she said. It means
remembrance and yet a sweet
bitterness but more,
love of a kind to last,
which is not some small comfort,
not to be mourned, no—
but celebrated
as rare and lovely
as our Sandia range
is eternal and blue ,
under a too-blue sky.
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Yay! I hoped you weren’t to tired from travels to submit today!
Exquisite 💜
even decades later, I remember the uniqueness of the Sandia foothills terrain, its vastness, its exposure, its permanence, embodying a “love of a kind to last.”
Thank you, Gaby, for checking in over the month, and for sharing your ekphrastic photo-poem experiences!
Really lovely, Greg! So enjoyed your poems – they often left like a travel guide!
Thank you, Sylvia, for your insights and your poetry!
Enjoyed reading your poems again this month!
I always enjoy reading your writing at Lexpomo. It’s comforting that we live in the same world. Like the song says we’re on the bus trying to make our way through.
Such a tender and moving expression the facets of love with nature at its core. Enjoyed your poems and adventures. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful writing, Greg. I’m glad you made it back and I’m sure I’ll see you before too long. Take good care, wherever you feel at home.
So atmospheric and tender with the vivid imagery of the mountains and the cool morning air. A gorgeous farewell to LexPoMo! “love of a kind to last” “celebrated” “eternal and blue” 💙✨
Wonderfully crafted and beautifully described. It’s been a joy to read your work this month. All the best, Greg!
Thanks to all of you for your kind, insightful, affirming words!
Looking ahead to next year, seeing you all again here!