1920: A photo
Your black and deep eyes
are openings to caves,
the kind where rabbis slept
when Jerusalem fell
as enemies lurked in the hills.
You are so tired now.
Your Great War is finished,
that brush of beard hides
the rush of age, the wife
and daughter you lost.
I have seen you before: 1894,
posed for another shot,
derby, waist coat, watch fob,
legs youthfully crossed at the knees.
Message received: you were free.
The final photo is missing.
Thirteen years in your future,
back of the store in Clairton, Pa.,
my boy of a dad sad as he heard
his half-brother wail, “The tata is dead!”
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“Your black and deep eyes/are openings to caves,/the kind where rabbis slept…” draws me strong into this poem.
” brush of beard hides/the rush of age, the wife/and daughter you lost.” carries me deeper into the dimension of this man.
MY…….
That opening stanza.
kicks open this incredible poem.
Lee, this is amazing.
Oh ! This is better than perfect.
Holy like a chant.
“sad as he heard
his half-brother wail, “The tata is dead!””
Is absolutely one of the most well crafted landings I have seen.
This poem is beautiful and haunting. Each stanza delivers. The ending is a surprise. It’s everything a poem should be.
I love the movement back and forth through time here – masterfully done!
Brilliant, buddy. Keep these going!
wonderful narrative of a man’s life from photos
Shew. Love “are openings to caves,/the kind where rabbis slept”