4:51 p.m.
(6/20/2024, the moment of the solstice)
4:35
Near the end,
past four Great Mullein plants
their seven foot erections
bowing down in the heat,
I walk to the deep shade
behind the hemp pond
to rest in the hammock
and swing slowly between
locust and maple,
like a slow leak
the sky trickles out
and falls into my hollow nap.
I will not look at my watch,
but wait and wait,
it will happen everywhere
at once for everyone and
everything on earth,
this common moment
this pull of the thread
when we’re one
4:51
I feel it:
the end
the beginning, that now
and again now, and now, and now
tilts the earth back,
this biannual action
ordinary as a grasshopper.
Summer can race on with its
milkweed
butterfly bush
blue chicory
5:07
I consider that this is the season
I will be seventy-six
and get up from the hammock
to exit my cool retreat. Down the hill
along the road, I hear
the mailman at the box.
The page is turned.
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Nice insight into your thoughts during the solstice and about life.
The image of sky trickling down to your hammock is splendid!
I love like a slow leak/the sky trickles out/and falls into my hollow nap.” and the last section is perfect–ties this in to your story and continues it onward.
Jim – you paint those moments beautifully – It’s a pleasure to read your words, your cataloging of life!
I love the motion of the hammock, suspended as the reader is suspended for the middle stanza. So much beauty in an ordinary grasshopper.
I like that this is documented the way it is.
It works really well.
All those “nows” helped keep me in the moment
experiencing your wonderful poetry, “ordinary as a grasshopper” indeed.
near the end
when we’re one-
the page is turned..
(and everything in between.)
love your words!!
I love the two trees and the hammock between them. Seconds tick away until a thing has passed. Shade, a cool breeze and a watch to anticipate the moment…