A Breath in the Rain
I ended up sitting in my car again
examining raindrops racing
down the windshield in a pop-up storm
lightning etching the sky in jagged flashes
punctuated by booms of thunder,
me stagnant on the edge of Main Street
watching traffic come and go behind the
curtain of rain.
There’s comfort in this in-betweenness—
the world in motion,
me in stillness,
just a breath
separating before and after,
a moment
too soft to call a storm
but too heavy
to ignore.
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Very nice – I like the idea of the car as a liminal space. I’d never thought of that before. (I got my grandson home just before the storm came through here, but was thinking we might be soending some time in the car.)
Enjoyed your poem.
Great appreciation for what unexpectedly forces us to be still.