a good sign
Fatigue undresses our cheeks,
our boots thhh-lucking through mud like molasses.
You’ve sweat already through your shirt this morning
and there is no ice for the tea.
The normal pacing of time has been lost
to the shaking of an unbalanced spin cycle.
All the flags are upside down
and I grow pale in the heat-
-a bad sign
The rows of this field seem endless,
didn’t we pull the same weeds yesterday?
Waiting on the seeds of better angels to sprout,
to give them what chance we can.
Maybe barefoot is better than boots, I offer.
Perhaps we should bow down instead of trample,
sing soft to the seeds that will feed us,
ask forgiveness of the holy soil.
Rest awhile in the shade,
I will mend you a fresh, clean shirt, make ice for the tea.
Rest, and remember how to pray.
I watch a bird, wide-winged, ascending-
-a good sign
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This poem does feel like signs of a better time to come. I love the sensory feel of “boots thhh-lucking through mud like molasses.”
Thank you Shaun, I truly hope that better times will return for all. There is so much heaviness right now.
“thhh-lucking through mud like molasses.”
“Waiting on the seeds of better angels to sprout,”
And my favorite, if only because it is where I feel today too:
“I watch a bird, wide-winged, ascending-
-a good sign”
Adore this all, Leah
Thank you 🙂
Wonderful. Those last two images, beautiful, hopeful.
This line, especially, will stick with me: “didn’t we pull the same weeds yesterday?” (Yep.)
I too like your description of the boots in the mudd! You’ve got lovely sensory detail in this poem, but
sing soft to the seeds that will feed us,
ask forgiveness of the holy soil.
THESE TWO LINES ARE THE “ZINGER!” WOW!!!
Thank you all for such kind words 💛
Leah, amazing. If only the people of this world would take off their boots, or even acknowledge the need to…
“The rows of this field seem endless. Didn’t we pull the same weeds yesterday?” Holds such meaning. Love the hopeful lines that follow each statement noting the present.
The noticing is beautiful. The end hopeful. The parallel of good and bad sign, brilliant!
Beautifully affecting, Leah. Ends with “a good sign,” providing hope and life-affirmation. Love the sensory images.