A Hundred Million Boo Radley
Bless the dreamers, the shouters—their courage
a bright, blunt knife. But some others are too tender
for the sun. Some bodies are porch-bodies
on their best days: peeling paint bodies, drawn
shade bodies, sanctuary bodies, absent bodies.
Bodies in the air of a closed room—bodies
that spring alive against the screen—
See how they move in the dark—a careful
architecture of ache and adaptation.
Outside, the glitter kisses the pavement
under streetlamp.
Inside, they keep their wilderness
unmapped—a secret even to the oak tree,
whispered to the moths that batter
the porch light’s dusty globe.
Their gifts are precious gifts: sometimes
a poem, a whittled figure of soap, a bell jar
of blackberries and sweet cornbread
stained with their thumbprint.
A hundred million signs left
on the neighbor’s lowest step.
Who needs proof? Scout
their ritual: their window cracked
their ritual: their window cracked
just enough to smell the rain. You can’t watch
the way they touch the small of their own wrist
at dusk—gentle, sure—leading
themselves outside to the moondrunk porch
all on their own terms.
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“Who need proof? Scout/ their ritual”… I see what you did there!
xD I could not resist to fit ’em both in!
I loved that too.
Love the way the central metaphor builds from all the references.
Thank you, Rachel!
There are so many great lines in this! It’s you at your finest.
What Chelsie said.
And the third stanza implodes.
Great, great poem !!!
The way this poem moves is fantastic!
Thank you! It was a bit of an exploration.
What a wonderful tribute to all those who live on the edges but still make their mark, those who reserve their presence until it matters most.
Thanks, Bud! Those voices matter.
Wow, Shaun! You so well capture the spirit of that soul.. Amazing lines throughout.
I’m so fond of …
“See how they move in the dark—a careful /
architecture of ache and adaptation. “
Thanks so much, Bill!
This is a fantastic title and a timely poem. Gentle but poignant, too tender for the sun.
Thanks, Arwen! I definitely relate to the subject.
Beautiful Shaun! I love the listing that you’ve woven through the basic metaphor. So many great phrases. A keeper!
Thank you, Greg!
I can so easily get lost in that world
Me, too, Pat! It’s comfy here!
Love your use of metaphor and imagery. “Porch bodies on their best days”. WOW! Just WOW!
Thank you, Linda! Heck, I would be even happy with a porch body lately!
Yes! a fine metaphor and vivid images, perfect for the turmoil we are living!
Thank you, Linda!
Powerful start to a poem titled in such a way that Boo drug me into it: Bless the dreamers, the shouters—their courage/a bright, blunt knife.
Love how you bloom out the sacred between Boo, Scout, and Jem.
Wow…wow…wow:
Who needs proof? Scout
their ritual: their window cracked
just enough to smell the rain. You can’t watch
the way they touch the small of their own wrist
at dusk—gentle, sure—leading
themselves outside to the moondrunk porch
all on their own terms.
Thanks, Pam. We need our Jems and Scouts–and our Boos.
I love this poem, Shaun! How you leaned into Boo’s world as the gentle introvert. The language and descriptions created this mysterious yet tender world. A poem of deep empathy.
Thank you, Ellen. That’s something I try to cultivate because I struggle with it sometimes: trying to find empathy
Shaun, this is my favorite so far. The title pulled me in and carried me throughout, each image building on the previous. Such an emotional, haunting ride for me.
Stunning work.
Thank you so much, Karen!
Like others said, those TKAM callbacks and that Scout line break were epic! I love this part: “See how they move in the dark—a careful / architecture of ache and adaptation.” It feels so lonely but also content and peaceful. As a sensitive soul, this poem really touched me.
Thank you, Danielle! I’m glad you were able to see something here.
Such a beautiful poem, my favorite:
a careful
architecture of ache and adaptation
Thanks so much, Deanna!