A Liturgy of False Gold on a Sunday
He thumbs the namesake Bible
on his knee: leather smooth as a drone’s wing.
His kind of Jesus hangs clean
as it did in the 50s like a chrome fin
in stained glass, anachronistically
gilded—meek, they call
the one they believed cracked
the whip in the temple,
the one who wept blood
in the gardens of the Levant.
This Jesus doesn’t sweat.
Doesn’t taste of dust
or cheap wine.
Doesn’t kneel in the dirt
with the woman from Samaria—
only points, pristine,
from a megachurch stage
where the collection plates
gleam like missile casings.
On the cracked leather couch,
the man clicks his tongue
And tweets, peace,
a dry rattle in the ribs of mountains
where the olive trees hold their breath
like mothers in a market line.
We’ve grown used to the rhythm:
security, freedom, fire.
All words gone slick
with overuse—
another a cross
on a campaign lapel.
Blessed are the peacemakers,
the preacher used to say,
as if peace were a passive thing,
a quiet room, a closed door.
Not the wild work of mercy—
And when they would lift the cup,
I tasted only metal.
This is the new liturgy:
the body of Christ,
crushed like limestone
under the boot of empire.
I want to believe in a different Jesus—
the one who’d turn his back
on the marble steps,
walk past the armored cars,
kneel in the broken field
to cradle a child’s shoe
full of consecrated glass.
The one who’d say:
Put down the stone.
Love thy neighbor.
Bring the little children…
like those stories once told me
in the 90s–during the beginning
of the middle of The Fall.
But the stones are too many now.
The earth won’t absorb
all the plastic, the diesel, the ghost-scent
of pomegranate groves
as three continents away
we watch the weatherman’s map—
and chew our bread,
stained gold with margarine.
False and forgiving gold.
Gold that glints like the clip
on the President’s pen
as he signs the heavens shut
to us.
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“Not the wild work of mercy” and so much more to praise in this poem. The religion of hate and greed. This is so sadly true and beautifully written, Shaun.
Thank you, Rosemarie. It’s something that’s been on my mind the last several years.
This brought me to much needed tears, thank you for this piece. So many incredible lines, I especially love
‘a dry rattle in the ribs of mountains
where the olive trees hold their breath
like mothers in a market line.’
I’m glad it met you where you are, Leah.
Whew! I believe your anti-sermon. Forgive me, I hope the tip of that pen is laced with arsenic.
Thank you, Linda. I understand!
Powerhouse of a poem, Shaun. “where the collection plates
gleam like missile casings.” is priceless.
Thanks so much, Bill!
“But the stones are too many now.
The earth won’t absorb
all the plastic, the diesel, the ghost-scent
of pomegranate groves
as three continents away”
This poem is brilliant. I love the weaving of biblical and secular elements– smooth and well matched. Great write!
Thank you! It was sitting hard on me.
wow…wow…wow
I love where your poems take us. You offer us another gem.
This poem ‘cracks’ powerful.
My heart lifts in the second stanza.
Too many fav lines to share all. Especially love:
“His kind of Jesus hangs clean”
“a dry rattle in the ribs of mountains
where the olive trees hold their breath”
“as if peace were a passive thing,
a quiet room, a closed door.
Not the wild work of mercy—”
and that ending shudders the poem to a close:
“he signs the heavens shut
to us.’
Thank you so much, Pam!
What an absolute gem. One of my favorites. As someone who deconstructed as they started to see the same juxtaposition you point out here, this resonates so much with me. Thank you.
Thanks, A.G. I deconstructed pretty early too for similar reasons.
Perfectly written for the perfect time as we’re being dragged into another war!
Thanks, Linda. I hope cooler hearts prevail.
Holy Cow, Shaun!
where the collection plates
gleam like missile casings. — wow. You nailed it.
This is an incredible work, and so terribly timely.
Thank you!
Thank *you* EE!
Wonderful use of language!
Thanks so much, Nettie!
Wow, Shaun! Sizzling hot political poem. Cogent, timely, necessary.
Thank you, Kevin. It was a tough one for me to want to post!
To use your word – Shew! I want to believe as well, but it gets more difficult with each day. “kneel in the broken field/
to cradle a child’s shoe” Stunning poem.
Shew! :p I want to believe too.
Staggeringly exceptional, Shaun. Inventive and deeply human in your ability to blend the personal, political, and religious. Despite the darkness and loss felt presently, the calling out of this “Liturgy of False Gold” is challenging and hopeful. Admirable work
Thank you so much, L! There is always some hope.
the whole direction of this poem, and every line in it – a jewel
ghost-scent of pomegranate groves
kneel in the broken field to cradle a child’s shoe
full of consecrated glass.
Thanks so much, Linda!
Shaun, this feels like a lament with a hint of vision mixed in. It hits hard and true. I love the line “as if peace were a passive thing.“ Peace requires right action. Keep writing your truth, brother!
Thank you, Bud!
“Words gone slick with overuse” stood out to me. I can picture the worn cover of my father’s Bible, carried often, opened scarcely.
This poem captures a hint of the disgust that has grown inside me over the last few years, reexamining a lot of childhood beliefs. Thanks for putting it all on paper, Shaun.
Thank you for reading and your kind words, David!
I’m so grateful to poets who can so clearly capture the overwhelm of this political horror show. Existential dread, so intelligently delivered. I most love this stanza:
Blessed are the peacemakers,
the preacher used to say,
as if peace were a passive thing,
a quiet room, a closed door.
Not the wild work of mercy—
Thank you so much, Ellen. 💛
as if peace were a passive thing,
a quiet room, a closed door.
Not the wild work of mercy—
Very powerful, and that last stanza too packs a landing punch
Thank you, Arwen!
your poem gave me literal goosebumps, Shaun!
💛
OH my, Shaun–this speaks so much truth! You’ve woven so many wonderful word combinations here. And I love: “His kind of Jesus hangs clean / as it did in the 50s like a chrome fin in stained glass,” This poem gives me inspiration to preach your kind of Jesus!
Thank you so much, Greg.
Well done, Shaun. I particularly liked this stanza:
Blessed are the peacemakers,
the preacher used to say,
as if peace were a passive thing,
a quiet room, a closed door.
Not the wild work of mercy—
Thank you, Karen! I think we could all use more of it.
This is stunningly layered, blending biblical allusion with sharp cultural critique. “His kind of Jesus hangs clean / as it did in the 50s like a chrome fin” is such a deft turn, capturing both nostalgia and estrangement. Your imagery—“collection plates / gleam like missile casings,” “the body of Christ, / crushed like limestone”—carries enormous weight. You question not just faith, but the ways it’s been weaponized and sanitized. The longing for a “different Jesus” feels both ancient and urgent.
Thank you, Dana! I think this longing is definitely an old one.
AMEN
<3
Shaun,
So many lines lit me up!
only points, pristine,
from a megachurch stage
a dry rattle in the ribs of mountains
where the olive trees hold their breath
Being in the YEAR OF THE SNAKE 2025 it’s as if we are in a strangling rhumba coil and your poem timely points to the hypnotic disgust of dis-tractions in a never ending barrage of tantrums! All the while pretending to be doing God’s will.
Thank you for a splash of holy water catharsis!
Thank you, Darlene! If only people would liaten with their hearts and not their biases.
Totally agree Shaun, yes, leading with our hearts what a bliss world we would be living in . . .