A Matter of Vision
I walk into the garage and detect
a squeak, a soft whirr – a hummingbird
lured inside by the red silk kite draped
on one wall. Cornered in unfamiliar territory,
the bird lacks a blueprint for escape.
Double doors are open to a breeze swirling
with the scent of flowers. The sky awaits.
Yet, this iridescent shimmer flaps
in a hopeless loop from nailed-up hula hoops
to the culpable kite and back again.
The farther inside I inch, the more frenzied
its flight. I murmur soothing words,
slink my way to the window and open it.
The breeze is instantly sucked through
the garage and out: a clear exit. I tiptoe
outside, watch with relief as the bird
drops down into that blossom of air
and drinks its freedom.
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I love this, especially “blossom of air.” Great image.
I agree with Shaun,
also especially like
“blossom of air”
Gorgeous language: among other phrases, “flaps/in a hopeless loop from nailed-up hula hoops”
Such wonderful, clear images and lovely language … I was so relieved when the bird escaped!
outside, watch with relief as the bird
drops down into that blossom of air
and drinks its freedom.
Love all your strong images.