A million engines in neutral
The exercise: take a random lyric from a song (for me, one written by Thom Yorke), and use it as the title/first line of the poem. Travel where it leads.
A million engines in neutral
I am fed to bursting with combustible ink,
a spark of the written Tao, fumes
of loving kindness, and here I am,
engines rumbling on countertops,
disrupting family meatloaf dinners
with angry cries of “Mindfulness!”
and “Ego trip!” and “Stop attaching me!”
and “Stop anchoring me down!”
and “Me! Me! Me!”—a million engines
prepped for a million-mile
journey into the heart of the sun,
wasting their fuel on the cul-de-sac.
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Compact, dense (kinda like a meatloaf!), well chosen language. Great use of conversation snippets, and the phrase “combustible ink” is a winner.
Love it, Sean. That last line is amazing.
Such irony. I especially love “engines rumbling on countertops” and that last line!
Excellent poem, Sean. The incongruous metaphors mixed with your strong voice made me stop, think, appreiciate your work. Also, your prompt made me feel as though I was back in the Gauntlet. Thanks!
Fantastic!