A poem from my 8 year old son
*my son was jealous I got to share my poetry, so I promised to share one of his.
My favorite thing about life
My family,
My cats,
My fish,
But especially the joy
Trees have leaves,
And so do we,
Our petals unfold
11 thoughts on "A poem from my 8 year old son"
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Great job, starting with your favorite things and moving to that cherry tree image! Nicely written!
Tell your son that this is wonderful! I love the last two lines especially.
He says, “Thank you, it really just came from my heart, and my brain, and nature.”
8 years old and already flexing his talent. ๐ Well done.
I am cheered by the poem and am amazed by the wisdom of the cherry tree in such a young person.
I really enjoy this!
an explosion of joy and surprise in the last lines!
Love this so much, your kid did amazing
Thank you!
Nice! Have him share more. ๐
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Get it, brotha!