A Rainy Day or Maybe Four
These rainy days bead up then run together
down the windowpane. He’s home now.
No one knows if his frail body will hold out another hour
or whole days. Time is one long, held
breath. I massage his swollen legs with lotion,
his skin, delicate
as the bark of the river birch when the tree
is finished with it. Twice,
while we watch the Reds game
I check for a flutter
in the loose folds of his neck
to be sure
he’s still with us. Awake now,
he tells us once more
and then again, something in his tone
as earnest as the rain at the glass,
I love you. You know
I love you.
No, I don’t need
more water.
No, I don’t need
more water.
I love you, dear.
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Beautiful poem, Jasmine
tender poem Jasmine. I love the line: “I check for a flutter in the loose folds of his neck to be sure.” That and “No, I don’t need more water.”
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Beautiful!
This is beautiful.
Lovely poem. Love the title – days do run together at such times.
long held breath
break, breath-taking
his tone, earnest as the rain at the glass — wonderful image and sounds.
Love is very vivid in this poem. It brought tears to my eyes.