A Violent Little Story
The
gro-
cer-
y
list
was
cow-
er-
ing
in
the
cor-
ner
and
could
not
pro-
gress–
but
the
bul-
let
points
kept
com-
ing,
nev-
er-
the-
less.
8 thoughts on "A Violent Little Story"
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the visual helps
show the story
love the title, the rhyme, the drama
Love these narrow form poems!
I like the play on words here: “A Violent Little Story” and “the bullet points kept coming…”
I also agree that the narrow format is effective!
nice!
also makes me think of a telegraph tape.
Yes, the bullet points keep coming!
I really enjoyed this poem
Powerful in form and meaning!