Advice Column
Keep eyes, ears and nose
on alert. Practice patience
till you can wait like a cat
perched on a stone wall
intent on a mouse.
Dispute trade-marked half
truths, like that Everything
Bagels are topped with
everything.
Smell the air after a storm
to see what fury’s end can
release.
Attend to the sound made
by bills dropped into
a mailbox. Record it
as a curiosity for
posterity.
Sift a clod of dirt
with your fingers.
Contemplate the soil’s
powdery gift to you
but don’t bother learning
the names of weeds. They
won’t be any easier
to uproot.
Watch a hummingbird’s
wings beat and with that
same energy ready-set-go
a good deed
like looking your bus driver
in the eye and accepting
her smile as if it were
a trophy
Ignore the come-hither
of a store’s water bottle
aisle, its implicit greed
an icy version of hell.
Plant pansies outside
your window so you’ll
see flower smiles when
life’s sun hides.
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I love the unique slant of these detailed descriptions. So many interesting and compelling lines here but I’m drawn to “the soil’s/powdery gift to you” a lot
Lots of wisdom here.
Each stanza is a gem in it’s own right.
For some reason the quirks reach out to me. The lone stanza enjambment
from 5 to 6 specifically did something good in the read and the 3rd is absolutely a wonderful piece of art.
but don’t bother learning
the names of weeds. They
won’t be any easier
to uproot. Love this! Great advice, and I’m glad the cat showed up again if only in comparison.
Loved the last lines- see flower smiles when life’s sun hides. Poem packed with so much wisdom.
Agree with Coleman, each stanza is a gem in its own right.
Especially love:
but don’t bother learning
the names of weeds. They
won’t be any easier
to uproot.
and
Plant pansies outside
your window so you’ll
see flower smiles when
life’s sun hides.