Advice Taken (Dark Cargo)
Tut, tut, looks like rain.
Time to paint—
thunderstrokes, eye whorls,
hail blobs, wind-swept skylines,
angry ship prow bleeding
acrylic on an unrecovered beach,
cross-hatched crevice torn
in the colonial grandeur,
fate of the dark cargo undetermined.
They tell me that this,
like every other storm will pass.
Silly old bear.
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love how those first two syllables establish a tone and how the last line echoes it
The informal bits here draw us in as if you were talking just to us. You paint nicely with your words! “Silly old bear” is a perfect ending!
Yes, nice painting with words.